What I have to offer is... (be specific)

I have a great potential re-sale market for properties in the new york and new jersey area.

What I am looking for is... (be specific)

Im looking for someone to coach and assist me with my first few deals, I am willing to do a 35/65 split with them. I have done a lot of research and spoke to several people in the industry and learned that Wholesaling will be the best way for me to get started. Look forward to working with you soon. Thank you!